This is the final treatment for our film, this treatment unlike the draft version has no spelling errors and may be different as we have changed things and got new ideas for our film the things that we have changed in this treatment is that it is the young girls birthday and the stalker (Aunty) visits the house to give the young girl her birthday present. We have also changed that after the stalker has visited the young girls house she goes to the doctors surgery for her IVF results so that it is clear to the audience that she is under IVF treatment and that was what the needle was for. We have made these changes so that the stalker then has a reason for going to the young girls house and also to show that the stalker is under IVF treatment.
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