Feedback for film idea

This is the feedback that we received from the rest of our media class for the idea for our final film.

Our group presented our film idea to the rest of our media class. We were recoreded so that we could gather questions and feedback from the rest of the class. We were told that our film idea was good, but people had a few questions about our idea and how we would create it.

At 3:24 Grant said that there was too much detail to include in a two mintue film. Our response was to make it shorter and easier to understand, also we don't have to show much detail of the woman going through IVF treatment. Mr Hood suggested a short clip of an IVF leaflet at the end of the film to show that she was going through IVF treatment, our group thought that it was a good idea to consider.

At 4:27 Adam asked if we were actually going to show a woman injecting herself, our answer was no we are going to show a woman holding the needle and shaking but not actually injecting herself.

At 5:00 Grant also asked how we going to use shadows without seeing the camera our response was that instead of shadows we are going to use hidden faces as you then can't see the camera or the stalker. Mr Hood also suggested that we could have the camera out of focus for this effect.

At 5:38 Josh asked if we doing a whole storyline or whether it was a opening clip. Our response was that we are going to set it out like a storyline and then only show the main parts so that it is two mintues long.

After gathering other peoples feedback we have decided to do some research on 'anti hero's' as people may feel sympathy for our stalker at the end. Overall our film is going to be a psychological thriller.